Revision #1

For my first revision, I decided to redo my Table of Contents in Adobe Indesign. After the feedback from my midterm submission, my teacher told me to make more effective use of my white space. Previously the background was red, which he told me was extremely expensive to do. I changed the layout too just to give it a more interesting look. I also thought it looked too plain with just two pictures so I added a third. I feel like this new layout is more eye catching and is more aesthetically pleasing than the old one. The new format is more appealing to readers as there is more to stimulate them.